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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
I SEE PINK.. IN UR SMILE... I SEE GREEN... IN UR CARE N CONCERN.. I SEE RED... IN UR ANGER... I SEE BLUE... IN UR ENCOURAGEMENT... I SEE WHITE... IN UR LOVE N AFFECTION... U HAVE GIVEN ME A BEAUTIFUL RAINBOW OF HAPPINESSS... AFTER MEETING U ..I DISCOVERED MYSELF... COZ NOW I KNOW WHO U R... U R LIKE A SHINNING STAR ....0 TO WHOM I CAN LOOK UPTO... WHENEVER I M DOWN... WHENEVER I FEEL DARKNESS... I KNOW THAT U WILL BE THERE AS A RAY OF LIGHT ... ......AS A RAY OF HOPE... ......THNX FOR EVERYTHING .... i wrote this when i was very happy ...and i was so much lost in that happiness that i forgot what m i writing .... plz comment (lol) Love me for who i m |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
I disagree hellabounds...I think there definitely can be happiness. A cruel trick is overarching optimism..(though that could be simply labelled as foolishness) but happiness isn't a trick at all, especially knowledgeable happiness, meaning the kind of happiness that occurs when you realize that there is still horrors out in the world, but when you're still happy. Some say ignorance is bliss, but i disagree with them too...Ignorance is temporary bliss, that can easily be stolen away by disappointment. However, if you know and expect all possible disasters, and can still be happy about current situations...yeah, that's happiness.... SORRY INTENTION! haaha, good job on this, i really liked this! <3keryn<3 any questions/comments on any of this philosophers crap-ola i've been writing lately, aim me/ email / [email protected] tell me you're from Pip... When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better. |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
I'm sorry...i REALLY liked this. I reread it, and realized i totally missed what i read before. FANTASTIC JOB on this...grammatical errors corrected and you have an A+++++++....I really enjoyed this one. <3keryn When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better. |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
thank you so much all ur responses... i dont know what other people consider happiness as but then i feel happy on every small things in this world it might be my illusion to consider it but i think to be happy in this world u need to feel tht freshness of happiness everywhere..if ur inside is willing to accept all chages then u r happy .. i dont know if m right but its the way i m ... lol  Love me for who i m |
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