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Teen Poetry #7

still holding my heart.

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2005-11-09 05:13 PM

in the room,
     with those walls,
     those permanent shadows
shining like hearts-
               yes, you live on.
live on the folding chairs
    in which we became pure;
    alive; puddles of
                           l  o  v  e.
(??)
  where we whispered
  our final secrets,
                          gone and gone and
                          finally you...
vanished.
vanished into another promise.
    morphed into another
    person's body.
floating along the beloved highways.
             you don't know what
             i need in this time of...
  this is the last time.
  i laid upon that floor to say goodbye-
  the closure will never be (mine)
         to hold.
god, believe in me.
because i believed in
                    nothing more than (fate).
                    destiny would never knock
                    upon my door,
always wanting more
          from who we…

once were.

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

1 posted 2005-11-09 08:37 PM

i really don't know why anyone didn't reply to this yet, but this is absolutely beautiful. but i always enjoy reading your work. nice job

I want life in every word, to the extent that it's absurd.- The Postal Service

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2005-11-15 06:09 AM

I haven't been here in the longest time and I looked through the list of usernames to see who I remembered, and you the first!

This poem was awesome, great work and you people better leave more comments!

~Jess

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

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