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0 posted 2005-11-13 03:41 PM





I  started  my  journey  all  alone,
Coz  no  body  was  my  own .
Then  in  the  middle  of  my  way,
I  MET  U.
U  told  me  the  right , to  make  myself  bright
U  remained  with  me  like  a  green  leaf  with  a  tree,
But  when  in  the  middle  way , u  left  me
I became  lifeless  like  a  leafless  tree,
Without  u  i  committed  mistakes,
As  nobody  was  there  to  tell  me  my  sake
Then  in  the end.......
After  bearing  so  many  strains.....
I  started  my  journey  again
WITHOUT  A   COMPANION...
WITHOUT  U.........
WITHOUT  U.........

Love me for who i m

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1 posted 2005-11-13 03:51 PM


hey
thnx for ur responses

Love me for who i m

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2 posted 2005-11-14 12:08 PM


this has such sadness to it...but in a good way..
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