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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
When as a child i was sent to school i cried a lot and wished to saty at home everything seemed as critical but atlast i entered a new world i met a world of new friends it was full of joy,full of new trendz we laughed ... we cried ... we shared ... and we spied ... so many fights ... so many pranks ... i still remember breaking toy tanks teasing each other hiding others things going here 'n' there as if we had wings doing something wrong scolded by the teachers giggling with friendz we had been funny creatures but when ever i think one day we all would leave losing each others hold i weep and i weep so dont u think how funny school life is we cry when we come and we cry when we go .... Love me for who i m |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
You seem to be busy, Intention, and I'd like to point out how rare it is to get replies this quickly on Piptalk. This, again, has some interesting ideas, but I'm not crazy about deliverance. I'm actually wondering just how old you are, because the way you write,(such as frendz) makes you seem younger. Keep at it though, I think, actually, your poetry reminds me of my earlier stuff, and I myself used to uze wordz like frendz and skool. Amusing actually <3keryn<3 When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better. |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
hey thnx a lot for ur responses.. i know i need to improve myself but its just i m new to all this thnx again |
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