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magicalfroggy
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0 posted 2005-11-12 11:08 PM



A hundred words I can’t explain,
About how I feel about you!
I’m always thinking about you,
I miss talking to you,
You always comforting me
When I need you the most,
I missed you giving me advice.
Everytime I tried to ask you out,
You always rejected me
And I was hurt everytime.
Now when i’m alone,
Sometimes I sit on my bed
And all I do is cry.
I cry because I miss you
I wanted you to be there for me,
To hold me when I need you,
Hold my hand if i’m scared,
To kiss me so I can feel special.
I hope one of these days
You change your mind
Because it’ll hurt me even more.
Then I’ll be to the point where
I cry everytime I see your picture,
Hear your voice when I here you talking,
I’ll hurt when people talk about you
I’ll run of to cry on someone’s shoulder
Because your not there anymore.

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2 posted 2005-11-13 03:11 PM


Welcome to PiP! interesting first post, but i would have like to see you use some sort of form for this, or maybe only used 100 words to talk about him. You have some really good ideas here though.

<3 ill keep an eye out for more of your poetry, and welcome again<3

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