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Teen Poetry #7

Smile for Life

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-11-06 06:46 PM

There is no one greater,
Or better than this,
A team of one,
Is a lone man fighting the world,

Gots to join a team and be strong,
Help another,
Not just your brother,
Just keep those smiles going,

When I tell you my story,
It may sound like a struggle,
But each day is my last,
That’s how I live it and forget the past,

Too many dreams broken,
Crumble like a cookie,
But in the end its you,
Who kept on smiling,

Do you feel the love?
These lines-
Don’t quite rhyme,
But that’s the end, with a new start.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

1 posted 2005-11-09 08:45 PM

oh, that's awesome, man. You got me with the ending. good job

I want life in every word, to the extent that it's absurd.- The Postal Service

only me
New Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 1
Australia

3 posted 2005-11-18 04:01 AM

this is good, but some of ur grammer isn't quite right. You should concentrate on that, and remember that all poems don't have to rhyme

intention
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA

4 posted 2005-11-18 07:45 AM

impressed
smile for life

Love me for who i m

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