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The Words She Never Wrote
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The Words She Never Wrote |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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She got so tired of false promises and empty lies, Yet every time it happens, it takes her by surprise. She wants to let go of you, and find her own way, But she’s so scared to fail, scared of what you’d say. The emptiness consumes her, her fear crippled by pride, She wants to be beautiful to the one who won’t open his eyes. No matter how hard she tries, it will never be enough, So she closes her eyes, and then she cries, and learns to be tough. The mind games get old, and the pain gets harder to hide, The truth gets harder to say, it’s just easier to lie. Her synthetic paint peels off, she’s just paints on another coat, Every layer represents all the words she never wrote. She over analyzes and tears apart every word you speak, It’s the fact that she loves you that makes her heart so weak. She said that being strong was never letting her feelings show, And she cries for the hurt and pain that you will never know. -Erin AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
I'm sorry for your pain in this piece... we of the male species aren't neccessarily the most intelligent or sensitive to others pain at times. i enjoyed the read tho "Her synthetic paint peels off, she’s just paints on another coat, Every layer represents all the words she never wrote." i really enjoyed that part, looking forward to more from you "Aerials, in the sky, |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
i agree with kaos, this was pretty good. |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
I loved this. The mind games get old, and the pain gets harder to hide, The truth gets harder to say, it’s just easier to lie. Her synthetic paint peels off, she’s just paints on another coat, Every layer represents all the words she never wrote. Awesome. I know this so well. I really liked the title of this. It definitely drew me in. Adding this to my library <3 I cant believe how long i waited |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
Is ur Signature from Thousand Foot Krutch? "this is a call?" I love that song. check it out if it's not. <3Keryn I cant believe how long i waited |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
amazing... sorry i didnt catch this sooner havent been on the site |
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StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
i agree with all of the above. kudos to you. so many lines in this are so poignantly written. great write. "and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
beautiful!!! |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
He wasn't saying that females are necessarily smarter, but that males sometimes just do not seem to catch on to subtle hints or sensitivities that we are more apt to show. Math, Science, English and other school subjects have nothing to do with it, it's the difference between perceptions of feelings in men and women. <3ker When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better. |
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DestinedSuccess Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 12California, |
I love this poem.. its exactly what I am going through with my ex.. we were together for 15 months.. I love it |
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