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Teen Poetry #7

The Face Before Me

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2005-11-03 08:57 PM

Hey all, I know its been awhile since I posted last but I still have been writing and will be posting some new stuff in the next couple days!! Enjoy!!

The Face Before Me

I was struck before the hour
Of a love so sudden and sweet.
Your face shone like a shining star
And made my own heart beat.
My face turned as pale as ever,
My legs refused to walk away
Yet when you looked at me
What could I possibly say?
My life had suddenly seemed
To all just melt away.

Then my blood rushed to my face
And it took my sight away.
It seemed like midnight
When it was only mid-day
I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start,
They spoke as a chord does from a string
And a sweeter melody it did play.

You seemed to hear my silent voice
And love’s appeal to dream
I never saw such a sweet face
As the one that stood before me.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2005-11-06 12:51 PM

good write chris welcome back

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

2 posted 2005-11-10 11:45 AM

"You seemed to hear my silent voice
And love’s appeal to dream
I never saw such a sweet face
As the one that stood before me."

I loved your poem but this was my favorite part.

great write!

Jezzika

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