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Teen Poetry #7

Memories

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2005-11-01 08:09 PM

She took in a deep breath
late into this endless night
wondering which of her memories
she was made to write
Those that burned her soul,
that forced her heart to bleed
Or those of love and lust
or the times of friends in need
Memories of times
where life was simple as could be...
...keeping this all in mind
she drowned herself in memories

<3

I might have messy hair, runny makeup and a tear-steaked face, but at least I know I have loved.

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

1 posted 2005-11-02 10:17 PM

nice job. to drown in memories....that's a good way of saying it

I want life in every word, to the extent that it's absurd.- The Postal Service

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

2 posted 2005-11-03 11:20 PM

This brings about a feeling of painful nostalgia. I'm here with you on this one. Good write.

nice use of muffin

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

3 posted 2005-11-06 11:53 AM

good piece

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

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