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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-09-12 08:15 PM



Whisper sweet somethings
Into my ear
Never a lie, always the truth
Do tell the truth.

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
Posts 248

1 posted 2005-09-14 11:04 PM


I loved this! I think that short poetry is some of the best, and anyone who can pull it off should be commended. Well done Laura!

<3KerR

I might have messy hair, runny makeup and a tear-steaked face, but at least I know I have loved.

StarryEyed3
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since 2005-06-26
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bostonia
2 posted 2005-09-15 11:04 PM


i agree... short and sweet, but so much room for personal interpretation and relation. i loved it

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."   -death cab

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