Teen Poetry #7 |
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Reflection |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time ![]() |
I dare to be different you call me a freak I wanna be heard but you don't let me speak I'm down and you wonder why!? not a day passes that doesn't make me cry, I gaze in the mirror and looking at me isn't the same person i used to see. Looks haven't changed but deep in the eyes a world is seen veiled in lies I see the reflection of a heartbroken child, his sanity slipping his feelings defiled. Emotionally raped by the people he needed, backs turned on him raped and then cheated. Shattered look a tear streaked cheek, Finally broken unable to speak. "Aerials, in the sky, |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
i don't know what to say, it was just...wow... this was a great write. great job |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
"Shattered look a tear streaked cheek, Finally broken unable to speak. " I loved how you ended it. The whole poem was amazing, I'm sorry that you feel/felt like this. Great Job Erin AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
thanks for the comments, like i've said before, it makes it easier to post when people reply, However, i must request that you don't feel sorry for me... what i go through is my path in life that i'm to face and hardship is just part of that, but we all have our writing to escape and i'm sure we're all thankful for that... anyway i'm rambling, thanks again for the comments "Aerials, in the sky, |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
Wow, I LOVED this. I'm adding this to my library...Fantastic. <3keryn I cant believe how long i waited |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
whoop whoop... im hyper but i like ur poem i dont think i have ever read anything of yours before... i havent been here in a while... good write... LOVE NEEDS TO DIE |
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StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
aw it sounds like you need a hug! great write, very powerful, even though you broke my heart a little. "and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Thank you all for the wonderful comments, you're all too kind ![]() "Do not go gentle into that good night, |
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