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Teen Poetry #7

Casted away forever

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2003-11-09 07:44 PM

My frosty lips,
You felt them.
I reeled you in.
My inclement force nipped you, and for some reason
You came back and tore.
I was lost in the sea of you.
Waves of anger fought us,
Sheets of ice appeared.
The anchor snapped,
I flouted out in a dingy,
Casted away forever.

I know you think that I shouldnt still love you
I'll tell you that
But if I didn't say it
Well, I'd still have felt it
Where's the sense in tha

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-11-09 08:17 PM

Really interesting but I really liked it, the imagery was good.

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-11-09 09:16 PM

what if he makes it on the first try....no one has ever made it on the fist try...

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