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StarryEyed3
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since 2005-06-26
Posts 58
bostonia

0 posted 2005-08-02 07:57 PM


i feel the sun on my face
and its warmth brings
new wounds to my frozen eyes,
but i celebrate
for finally reaching a place
where anyone else's
tears no longer trigger my own

and i listen to music that
crumbles my heart,
as if i can bear someone else's pain,
as if my own is not enough

it's our time after all
and the only moments
that become my reality
are the ones i spend
with you

maybe no one sees

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."
-death cab

© Copyright 2005 Julie Burgess - All Rights Reserved
skoolyardturtle
Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96

1 posted 2005-08-09 01:13 AM


this is good.  Usually a thoughtful write is a really long one, but you say a lot in a few verses. nice job
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2005-08-10 01:14 AM


... a strong melody sways from your words.

   deeply touched

CT

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