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latelyluv
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since 2005-07-09
Posts 5
AR, United States

0 posted 2005-07-27 09:05 PM



Over and over I try and get you off my mind
There's something about you which makes me feel the way I do Im still in love with you But your friends got you thinking and its affecting you
But it dosent matter what your friends do they're just juealous of me and you I don't know what to think because Im scared of loosing you
I've been hiding away far too long
I hope you still feel I belong
Cause when i thought we were through
Some how I found my way
Right back to  you

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StarryEyed3
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since 2005-06-26
Posts 58
bostonia
1 posted 2005-07-29 07:23 PM


nice. i like your rhythm.

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."
-death cab

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