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Teen Poetry #7

shhh...it's a secret

* shining star*
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since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

0 posted 2005-07-19 07:39 PM

Don't tell anyone that empty.
Dont say anything,
that I don't listen to everyone's opinions.
If you really care you'll say nothing.
That is how you show your love isn't it,
by doing nothing.
But don't say anything about,
how I could careless what you think of me.
If you hate me then so be it.
I'm tired of having to be perfect.
And as you can see,
it only effects you from my success.
But please don't tell anyone,
shh it's a secret.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

1 posted 2005-07-22 03:45 AM

Mmkay well that PERFECTLY described how mah liast relationship went.. I kept telling myself everything that was said in this piece! I liked it alot and i can relate to the whole thing! Why are some guys such jerks? Good luck with that tho and great job!
*Holly*

* shining star*
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since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

2 posted 2005-07-24 02:17 PM

Haha well guys can be jerks, but there's always one that stands out!

-Smile, it's not a sin.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-07-25 10:44 PM

You have this style thatis so subtle and at the same time there and cleAR.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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