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Teen Poetry #7

Sometimes Both

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-07-14 01:01 AM

I care too much,
I can't say it's over and let it be true.

I wait around,
wondering if you will call.

I keep on,
till I get what I want.

I stand up for what I believe in,
nothing more or less.

I am thoughtful;
always putting the ones I love before me.

I hold on;
to lost loves and broken friendships.

I am open;
I will always tell you what I think.

Weaknesses.
Strenths.
Sometimes both.

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2005-07-17 02:42 PM

Hmm it was ok some parts didnt seem to flow right to me, but anyways good effort

Im sorry i've failed you all.

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

2 posted 2005-07-19 10:48 PM

i really like this poem keep posting

-Smile, it's not a sin.

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

3 posted 2005-07-22 03:43 AM

This piece is really good to me and it flowed nice in mah eyes! Great job and i can relate to it...
*Holly*

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-07-22 09:12 AM

I liked this one very much...

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2005-07-24 11:04 PM

thanks

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2005-07-25 10:42 PM

nice

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

7 posted 2005-07-26 01:09 AM

thanks juju

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