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StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
betting on love with truth or dare and countless games of pool. we were so innocent, but guilty enough to know that time is measured by crashing waves and broken hearts. and the clock wastes away the seconds as your cigarette smoke weaves into nothing. i can't even hear the stars twinkle anymore over the sound of my reality crashing down. this game is always played for keeps and no one ever wins. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is excellent...  |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
NICE...i understood your message perfectly, good job |
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* shining star* Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76PA,USA |
sweet poem -Smile, it's not a sin. |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
love it... great job Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
This was amazing... loved your word choice.  Jezzika |
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