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Teen Poetry #7

You, Me, And Equalty

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

0 posted 2005-07-02 02:57 PM

Here it goes,
the downward spiral into the deep hole.
No one to look down
to ask, hey are you ok?
No one to see me,
to see the bruises on my heart
that many have left.
When people look into my eyes
they say wow, she's awesome.
But am I?
am I nice or good or great?
How about I am average.
Because there is no one above me,
and there is no one below me.
We are all equal.
All of us have good qualities
and bad ones.
We all have problems,
but we all handle them different.
Some hide them like they are perfect.
Some show them to make others care.
And some just hurt themselves,
more than they need to.
So I say if you are in that downward spiral
into that deep hole.
Then take that elevator right back up,
right back up to the top,
or go even higher.

[This message has been edited by * shining star* (07-02-2005 11:51 PM).]

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2005-07-03 01:01 AM

I needed that thanks.

love will make you beautiful

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2005-07-06 08:48 PM

it's good

a little choppy but good

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