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spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

0 posted 2005-07-01 10:41 PM

Best Friend???

Best Friend
Best Friend
How could you do this to me?
Make up a lie
that could ruin someone elses' life
You're supposed to be someone
who I can go to when I'm down
Someone to lend a helping hand
Someone to give a shoulder to lean on when I'm sad
But you're to worried and into you're self
searching, demanding for attention
and beleiving everyone "loves" you
as so you think to yourself
so you turn the tables
into somthing it's not
Thinking of no one but yourself
not caring who you hurt
So all I have to say to you is
Best Friend
Best Friend
Look what you've done to someone you
Promised never to hurt!

spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

1 posted 2005-07-02 10:54 PM

this is about my one friend who i thought weas a friend who turned out not to be due to jealously and attention wanting...she really hurt me and a couple other ppl too

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

2 posted 2005-07-16 08:55 AM

First, I'm sorry that he/she has done this to you. But, I didn't really like this one. It just seemed sort of, to quote young_blood for once(in something he said to me), bland. It seemed to lack real thought, instead you wrote down something to a friend. It was as if you were too emotional to shift through actual feelings. It seemed kind of copied, Not to say you copied it, but the phrasing. It seemed unoriginal, and while i Honestly doubt that you haven't gone through this ordeal, you lacked creativity in expressing this ordeal, in a new light. Message=fantastic, phrasing=overused.

Honestly, I'm sorry I am so morbid with everyone this morning....really. I am.

<3

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

3 posted 2005-07-16 04:42 PM

its ok....but thank you for being honest...i WILL try harder next time...i dunno i was just so angry that this is how it came out...ya know?? but thamks!

"For every drop of my blood that falls is because of you" ~Spaz02~

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