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Teen Poetry #7

tripping over love

* shining star*
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since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

0 posted 2005-06-30 01:28 PM

You said you liked me a little bit,
that little bit turned into,
an ocean with waves crashing on my heart.
When i look into your eyes now,
I see a person with my love and no emotion,
someone who does not care.
Even though I am with you,
I feel so far away and empty.
Why can I not feel what you feel,
is there something wrong with me?
Maybe I am a mistake to have you,
with your heart open.
and mine permanently sewn shut.
My eyes are filled with water,
or I am just tripping over your love.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-06-30 05:58 PM

it's hard when one loves the other more...or one loves and the other, just doesn't. Don't feel bad. But I wouldn't stay in the relationship if you like this person and don't want to hurt them more by staying...

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2005-06-30 06:18 PM

i agree w/ sea in the end both of you can get hurt.

love will make you beautiful

spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

3 posted 2005-06-30 07:10 PM

i enjoyed this....i think it could be a little longer...its interesting...

~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

4 posted 2005-07-21 05:12 AM

Good job! I liked this!
*Holly*

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