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Teen Poetry #7

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tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-06-28 06:00 PM

You say one thing,
mean another.
Your acting just like my mother.

You say you want me,
and you say you care.
The way you treat me just isn't fair.

You said you'd call me,
I called you instead;
You told me you were lying down in bed.

It just so happens,
you were on the phone with another girl.
Knowing you did it again makes me want to hurl.

I told you to prove yourself to me,
and show me what I mean to you.
Was it that hard to do?

love will make you beautiful

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

1 posted 2005-06-28 07:09 PM

You don't need that.....I hope things get better.

Well written.

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

2 posted 2005-06-30 11:56 AM

i am really feeling this. been there done that...stay strong and you shall prevail. keep writing, it helps.

shara

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2005-06-30 06:20 PM

thanks guys! im out! yeah for me! finally only took...4 months

love will make you beautiful

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