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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2005-06-28 05:45 PM



It's that,
can't eat,
can't sleep,
thinkin' of you every day of every week,
missin' you before I leave.
It's that crazy kind of love.

It's that,
holding you in my arms,
reading your mind,
I'll never let go,
till the day I die.
It's THAT crazy kind of love.
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this is really cliche but I havent posted in forever and havent written either just had to do something rather than just sit in the pool today.

love will make you beautiful

© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
spaz02
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since 2005-06-28
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1 posted 2005-06-30 12:05 PM


i like this...it is fun and fun ...and i liked it.... i like all ur work!
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2 posted 2005-06-30 12:54 PM


I liked this...sometimes, it's ok to be cliche...no worries...
and i wish it would stay warm enough here for me to get in my pool!

tearsoflove13762
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3 posted 2005-06-30 01:18 AM


thanks for the positivity i need it right now!

love will make you beautiful

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4 posted 2005-06-30 01:31 AM


you should go check out the challenges area here...that can sometimes give you too much to write about..look over them..there are lots of great ones...
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shara
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5 posted 2005-06-30 11:36 AM


i liked this one, i enjoy most of your writes though... I don't know what you are going through but keep ya head up, know that you are victorious and your situation will work out in favor... get out the pool and start back writing...NOW!!!
  
     shara

~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09
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In The Clouds...
6 posted 2005-07-21 05:11 AM


Those feelings are all true too! Great work!
*Holly*

aussie teen
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7 posted 2005-07-21 08:47 AM


this is soooo much like my life right now... well written.... i love it..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

* shining star*
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8 posted 2005-07-21 09:35 PM


i really like this one.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
9 posted 2005-07-21 11:24 PM


thanks! *blushes* lol

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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