Teen Poetry #7 |
That Crazy Kind of Love |
tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
It's that, can't eat, can't sleep, thinkin' of you every day of every week, missin' you before I leave. It's that crazy kind of love. It's that, holding you in my arms, reading your mind, I'll never let go, till the day I die. It's THAT crazy kind of love. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ this is really cliche but I havent posted in forever and havent written either just had to do something rather than just sit in the pool today. love will make you beautiful |
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spaz02 Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 74USA |
i like this...it is fun and fun ...and i liked it.... i like all ur work! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this...sometimes, it's ok to be cliche...no worries... and i wish it would stay warm enough here for me to get in my pool! |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
thanks for the positivity i need it right now! love will make you beautiful |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you should go check out the challenges area here...that can sometimes give you too much to write about..look over them..there are lots of great ones... /main/forumdisplay.cgi?number=7 |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
i liked this one, i enjoy most of your writes though... I don't know what you are going through but keep ya head up, know that you are victorious and your situation will work out in favor... get out the pool and start back writing...NOW!!! shara |
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~*BayBee*~ Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 65In The Clouds... |
Those feelings are all true too! Great work! *Holly* |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is soooo much like my life right now... well written.... i love it.. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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* shining star* Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76PA,USA |
i really like this one. -Smile, it's not a sin. |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
thanks! *blushes* lol LOVE NEEDS TO DIE |
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