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Today's Elevation |
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Whitehowl Junior Member
since 2003-10-14
Posts 10 |
Hey all, I just kind of wrote this here to express what I feel about these days. Thanx for any feedback. The generation of today brings the mind questions Altering the souls with dreams and crazy suggestions Are you gonna be like your idol with desperate hopes of cries Or not even close to those you look to in your eyes No one knows your destiny, a mystery unsolved to be told Like that God's messenger waiting to grow and then behold All around stressin on timely outcomes Scared to see the fate, then to deal with their problems The truth is here and is said straight up But non wanting truth is concealed and turned corrupt Hipocrites and two-faced fanatics are everywhere They say {edit} and want the greats to change and to suffer They say that {edit} cause they're nothing, and will always be nothing The judgemental bastards have the devil in them ready to scorch any being Any being able to take responsibility and change wrong existants Any being able to light the world and give hope to the distants Attempting to change the youth to follow them through their path Before they sprout, rise, and learn to avoid their wrath Monkey see monkey do, human see human do It's simply like that, and it's easily true Your peers wanting to be like their desirable icons Repeat in the lines of those like recitals The media is decieving and tricks you with an illusion whirl Imagination runs wild and you drift into another world Having hopes and dreams to be that star in the skies Looking up above like it's the only thing that's not in disguise Today's elevation is profound and impacts us excessively And it's what causes us to move on progressively [This message has been edited by SEA (11-07-2003 04:56 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you need to edit out the astricks that are in there, they are not allowed any more than a curse word is. You are allowed a 24 hour window in which to do this, before, it will be done for you, thanks, SEA |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
yeah....no star like thingies. shame on you. and shame on me. good write. idolization....im not a fan either. but we do it. |
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