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0 posted 2005-06-25 08:27 PM



Fear love,
For when it is lost,
You will remorse,
For giving up,

Fight it you must,
To prove its worth,
Doubt not the other being,
But yourself, and your will,

See yourself as the half-
Which fulfills the circle,
That binds many with rings,
But your test is in loyalty,

Win the war,
And love conquers all,
Go forward hastily,
To be conquered by love.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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since 2005-06-25
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1 posted 2005-06-25 09:07 PM


this was an awesome poem I really enjoyed reading it.

Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal.

WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24
Posts 108
Iowa, US
2 posted 2005-06-26 03:26 PM


Really good... shorter than you're usual.. but the length fits the subject!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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