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Teen Poetry #7

fight it

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-06-25 08:27 PM

Fear love,
For when it is lost,
You will remorse,
For giving up,

Fight it you must,
To prove its worth,
Doubt not the other being,
But yourself, and your will,

See yourself as the half-
Which fulfills the circle,
That binds many with rings,
But your test is in loyalty,

Win the war,
And love conquers all,
Go forward hastily,
To be conquered by love.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

doyouseemeforme
Junior Member

since 2005-06-25

Posts 18

1 posted 2005-06-25 09:07 PM

this was an awesome poem I really enjoyed reading it.

Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal.

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

2 posted 2005-06-26 03:26 PM

Really good... shorter than you're usual.. but the length fits the subject!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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