Teen Poetry #7 |
fall back |
thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
It's been just over 2 years now and I'm over it by all accounts. I just haven't met anyone of such consequence Since those years I spent with 'her'. I rarely think back that far, Thinking on it only depresses me. It reminds me of the girl I once had, The one who's now married and gone. And I'm left biting my fingernails, smoking my cigarettes and reading my endless mountains of books To what end must I fall back alone? I meet plenty of people in a day. Coffee shops and cigarettes make that a given. It's been so long though, Since i've cared for someone in such a way... Where do I begin? I've read so much, and experienced even more for someone my age, it's just that I'm a little afraid I'm just a little tired of being alone, not alone as in alone and without friendship. 2 years and i've had no interest...i'm the problem but... I want to fall back into love I want to fall back into love |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I love this..... |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
Ok, so this probably won't make any sense, but i didnt like this one, and i loved it at the same time. I didnt like how it was written too much, but i loved the message. and i know how you feel. Somehow, i think i feel more love for the concept of love than i ever have for any person in my life. No, i lie. I honestly loved one person in my life, but im not going into that. Good message, and i agree well written. It just didnt agree with me.... i dont know, ignore me. This was such a waste of a post. Sorry. Keryn |
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SwT DeViL Junior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 26London |
hey....this was good....n i gues its from personal xperience....i really know were u coming from...but this poem oviously showz u still hav the same feelings for that person....and i really dont believe in love so i dont kno...but im sure thers someone out there thats waiting for ur love init.... hope it helps take care ***...$wT DeViL...*** I'm Me... Coz I'm Not U... Ur U CoZ Ur NoT Me... |
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doyouseemeforme Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 18 |
I love this one Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal. |
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