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thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23
Posts 125
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0 posted 2005-04-27 01:26 AM


It's been just over 2 years now and
I'm over it by all accounts.
I just haven't met anyone of such consequence
Since those years I spent with 'her'.

I rarely think back that far,
Thinking on it only depresses me.
It reminds me of the girl I once had,
The one who's now married and gone.
And I'm left biting my fingernails,
smoking my cigarettes and reading
my endless mountains of books
To what end must I fall back alone?

I meet plenty of people in a day.
Coffee shops and cigarettes make that a given.
It's been so long though,
Since i've cared for someone in such a way...
Where do I begin?
I've read so much, and experienced even more
for someone my age, it's just that
I'm a little afraid

I'm just a little tired of being alone,
not alone as in alone and without friendship.
2 years and i've had no interest...i'm the problem but...
I want to fall back into love
I want to fall back into love


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Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
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1 posted 2005-04-27 01:22 PM


I love this.....
CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
Posts 248

2 posted 2005-05-02 10:53 PM


Ok, so this probably won't make any sense, but i didnt like this one, and i loved it at the same time. I didnt like how it was written too much, but i loved the message. and i know how you feel. Somehow, i think i feel more love for the concept of love than i ever have for any person in my life. No, i lie. I honestly loved one person in my life, but im not going into that. Good message, and i agree well written. It just didnt agree with me.... i dont know, ignore me. This was such a waste of a post.

Sorry.
Keryn

SwT DeViL
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since 2005-06-21
Posts 26
London
3 posted 2005-06-26 06:43 PM


hey....this was good....n i gues its from personal xperience....i really know were u coming from...but this poem oviously showz u still hav the same feelings for that person....and i really dont believe in love so i dont kno...but im sure thers someone out there thats waiting for ur love init....
hope it helps
take care


***...$wT DeViL...***

I'm Me... Coz I'm Not U... Ur U CoZ Ur NoT Me...

doyouseemeforme
Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 18

4 posted 2005-06-26 07:46 PM


I love this one

Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal.

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