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Teen Poetry #7
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tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
0 posted 2005-05-14 01:13 AM


I was so tangled up in you.
You were so tangled up in me.
Gave up so much and now we dont have nothin left.
Not even each other.

Now your tangled up in her.
At the time in my life
that I need you the most.

Why cant you just talk to me.
Help me be ok.

Now I am all alone.
Everyone is gone.
You said you would always be there for me no matter what.

So where are you now?
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with you
1 posted 2005-05-14 02:11 AM

this is really sad, but sounds like it's coming from your heart....
I'm sorry you are hurting.
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