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Be Careful What You Wish For
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Be Careful What You Wish For |
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mindy Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 34VA, US |
Be Careful What You Wish For Recalling the time I wished for love... Every night I talked to the gods above. When I found love for the first time, I was enchanted. Thankful to him, that all my wishes had been granted. Then love crumbled, shattered to pieces... From my heart, all good memories releases. Preparing to move on, and keep trying... Seemed like the same song, felt like I was dying. But then new friends came, and I renewed the old... And to many friends, my heart was sold. But then I found this love, so true... Feeling like gold all the time, so new. Then more love came, from every direction. My heart now separated into different selections. I know I love him, but regret letting the others go. Afraid that for the others, I can't let my love show. Now overpowered with love, I can't stay on top. I love him and without him, my heart would stop. But all outside forces, I can't keep from my door... I guess I should be careful of what I wish for. [This message has been edited by mindy (11-05-2003 12:34 PM).] |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
I know exactly how you feel. It felt as if you were writing from my heart. I LOVE this piece of writing.... more than words can truly describe! I definitly hope to see more of your writing around here! Thanks for posting!! -Erica- |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
hmmmmm....no doubt |
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