Teen Poetry #7 |
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Getting Over You |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
No matter what I tell myself, the pain won't go away. No matter what I try to think, the hurt will always stay. The more I try to help myself, to keep you from my mind, the more I seem to think of you, and your kiss that was so kind. I know we wern't together long, and that things just didn't work. You didn't even tell me face to face, man you're such a jerk. I cried myself to sleep last nite, wondering how you feel. Why did you change your mind that nite, I'm still hoping this can't be real. I know you made up your mind, and there's one thing I can do. The only thing that's left for me, is to get myself over you! |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
aint love a kick in the head. bad da da da da da dad a da |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I'm sending this to my best friend now cuz she is still trying to get over a summer love, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Flowed very nicely |
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mindy Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 34VA, US |
Yeah, love can be hard...but getting over it can be worse! But hey, we all go through it...it can happen. [This message has been edited by mindy (11-05-2003 12:37 PM).] |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This was a great poem, everything flowed really well together. I felt it the WHOLE way through. Great write! It's goin' in my library! ~Jess ![]() "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I agree with everyone else, this was great, it flowed well, awesome job. "Cut my life into pieces, this is my last resort."~PaPaRoach |
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xtel Junior Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 16 |
Hey... i know what u r feeling. i went through that last year xte| |
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