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Teen Poetry #7

a punch in the face

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2005-05-04 04:40 PM

i don't owe you a damn thing!
so quit trying to make me feel guilty.
i didn't make you cheat on me,
so how am i to blame?

please, get your reality straight,
realize that you hurt me,
not the other way around!
your apologies don't mean anything.
you can't hide behind your games now.

because when you say,
"please...i'm so sorry,
i realize i love you now!"

i say that is complete crap
and you're lucky i don't hate you
now

-bergundy

thanks guys, this is kind of a rant but it's important, and i'd still really appreciate honesty. I actually edited the last line because i'm a good PIP-er =). thanks again!

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-05-04 05:30 PM

he sounds like someone you are better off without! It's a good rant....

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2005-05-11 01:54 AM

great rant!!! i feel exactly the same way right now except... oh wait hes dumb and wont even admitt he cheated!!! AHHHH guys are dumb...sorry chris lol

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2005-05-12 03:35 AM

good rant
everyone needs to write them occasionally... you definitly are beter off witout this person...
well written and keep more coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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