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Teen Poetry #7

Clinging and letting go

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-05-02 10:41 PM

I cling to your arm as we walk through the stores.

I cling to your every word.

I cling to your soft lips.

I cling to your sweet touch.

I let go of your anger.

I let go of your guilt.

I let go of your jealousy.

I let go of your hand.

love will make you beautiful

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

1 posted 2005-05-02 10:44 PM

did you plan for it to go that way? it sounds as though you were writing something TOTALLY different to start with... i like it, although its not my usual taste. im not usually a fan of repetition...

Hmm...you've got me thinking now.

keryn

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2005-05-02 11:18 PM

actually i didnt plan for it to do that... i never think when i write... i cant lol

love will make you beautiful

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