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a loud goodbye.
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a loud goodbye. |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
choking, riding neck in neck next to a hoe talking on her diamond encrusted cell phone; have you heard death call you before? it sounds slippery and deceased, its words increased by the murmur of static hiding beyond the white fence. so, close your eyes and take a deep breath, don’t forget to seduce the modest melodies; turn off the radio, turn off, turn. the next right is to your left; he kisses with open eyes and a love suicide, so don’t believe his heart when he turns to say goodbye. be dizzy today, pretend you never knew what all of this had meant in the first place. you love to be loved and when the tree hits the windshield and he stands next to your angel smiling, i think you'll finally know how your veins seep with revenge, a bloodshed regret that will never mend. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
very graphic and emotional. I felt all of it |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
The beginning seemed to confuse me, I didnt think the beginning made sense but the rest flowed well. I like it. |
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