Teen Poetry #7 |
maybe our hearts were just next in line. |
electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
rumbling around in my veins somewhere, we saved it for a brighter day. the tears are too much for my taste, she complains wandering around somewhere inside the tv screen. be quiet and stop letting people know how much you're hurting. this mask calls for some broken pieces of respect, sitting in the tiny box and reading magazines about pretty skinny regrets and pink lip gloss. it's not what you think, don’t feel. don’t feel for the sun. and we walked around. love was present but i wasn’t able to read between the lines, wasn’t able to read his mumbling lips. it was all illusions anyway, just visions of things that are always kept a secret. hushed hues and darker moons. stumbling around in the attic and never finding your way. and she doesn’t know, you don’t know. that today, we are all broken inside of our shell. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
wow. this is phenominal! I'm off to read it again. you continue to amaze me. |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
You continue to amaze everyone!!!! You write about things noone on here has and I love that. This poem has a lot of different meanings. Keep up the good work!!!!! |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
all i can say is thank you for being able to write such amazing poetry. i feel like hell right now, and this does help. bergundy |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Beautiful, and amazing...wow. Awesome job! XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I love this! The end was my favorite part. Another one for my library. If I could fall asleep tonight |
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