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oh how he changed |
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poise_and_rationality Junior Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 46my mind |
*this poem aint ment to ryhme just to point out about a youth's love* do not love to long, i loved long and long, and it grew to be out of fashion, like and old song. All through the years of our youth, neither could have known their own thought's from other's, we were so much at once. but oh in a minute he changed- Oh do not lnove to long you will grow out of fahion like an old song... Give me attention Give me envy Give me malice Give me a break! Have some composure And where is your posture? |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Okay, first off I like how you pointed out to us that this wasn’t meant to rhyme, that really helps me in deciding how I’m supposed to read this poem. I’m not sure I really understand the whole thing though. Are you warning us not to love to long as a teen because when we become older we’ll move on? Also that if we love someone to long they will get used to you and not want you anymore because you’re an everyday person? Maybe you could explain the whole meaning of this poem… it’s rather confusing for me, I must be dense or something. As always I’m glad to see some of your poems online even if I don’t always understand them  @-->--- |
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poise_and_rationality Junior Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 46my mind |
wow thanx stargal yea the poem is based on the fact that if you love to long you'll turn old like a song that once your used to listening to it so many times you get sick of it and no one will want to knwo you anymore....if you catch my drift? Par |
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