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a poem about a flower
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a poem about a flower |
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drummerboy678 Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 134 |
maybe its true, in a really sad way, that, like a flower, we can never flourish, never reach our full potential until we’re in the ground. Cynical as **** , I know... Havn't been here in a while though, and thought I'd post a short one. Comments and criticisms are welcome. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
being cynical is sort of part of being a poet. I like it a lot actually. it's hard to make a point with so few words. you did this very well. well done, sir! welcome back and keep posting! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I've not seen better examples of what is possible with concicse writing than this. Cynical it may be, but quite possibly true none the less. Well done! Now I shall depart, awaiting the harsh, but not overly so, reviews my poems will inevitably garner from you, master of words. "I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless" |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
I admire people that are able to write short poems that actually sound good and make sense since I have such trouble doing that. I applause you for this, can't wait to read some of your other work. -Kelly You play the song I know. |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
Although I dont really understand this poem, I can tell that you really feel for it and I admire it. If more poets wrote what they feel we would have better poems out there. Good Job on expressing your feelings. Most people can not do that!!!!! |
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