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0 posted 2005-02-28 10:31 PM


i know its short and dumb but i had to write and get some stuff out of my mind comment please
Did you stop soon enough?
      Terrified.
In a few months I will know.
      Time.
Why did I act so out of the ordinary?
      Strange.
I have no idea what to do.
      Confusion.
  

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tearsoflove13762
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1 posted 2005-03-02 12:04 PM


ya i just re-read this poem and it makes me laugh! lol wow what was i thinking writing this? lol sorry for you if u read this i was just stressed
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2 posted 2005-03-02 12:36 PM


It just makes me wonder what you did...and more importantly, are you ok? short is ok, and it's NOT DUMB. Don't put yourself down like that...
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3 posted 2005-03-02 12:54 PM


This could mean many of things.....this is not dumb, I cried when I read this.
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4 posted 2005-03-02 03:55 PM


A really wonderful peice of writing, though might I suggest that you format your messages so that the poem stands out from your comments? Still it was a most enjoyable read thank you for sharing it here

Andrew

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5 posted 2005-03-02 09:47 PM


wow guys thanks... lol it helped my confidence a heck of a lot
- laura

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