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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York 
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alright, i made this short thing up just a little while ago... I lived in that moment of forever for too long and now my dreams are shattered, my clothes are torn, and what's left? a wounded soul. "Stand still awhile and dream of the times when your heart felt full." ~Reina Nash~ R.I.P. 9*6*04 You'll always be remembered, I love you! [This message has been edited by WindSong (02-28-2005 11:01 AM).] |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
this is something like what i would write. i love short poetry that gets to the point and gets out. it sometimes is more powerful than longer poems. thanks for sharing -hold on to the one you love |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
If this is what you "just make up", then I REALLY want to see something you take your time on. You have a great future as a poet ahead of you. In the wooden chair |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
wow... i reallly liked it. It was short and too the point.  Jezzika you know he really wants me |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Aw, thank you all of you. I'll be sure to write some more...:-) Actually, if you wish to, search me...theres tons of things in the archives hehe. Thanks again! Take care. Peace, Love and happiness... -Kirah "Stand still awhile and dream of the times when your heart felt full." ~Reina Nash~ R.I.P. 9*6*04 You'll always be remembered, I love you! |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Kirah this is such an incredibly beautiful peice of writing, I really enjoyed the read, please keep on sharing your wonderful writing with us. Andrew |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
I'll try! And thank you! "Stand still awhile and dream of the times when your heart felt full." ~Reina Nash~ R.I.P. 9*6*04 You'll always be remembered, I love you! |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Hey Kirah. Nice to "see" you again lol. I really love this so much. I can realte to it right now perfectly. But then, I can relate to all your work! This one is going in my library. If I could fall asleep tonight |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Nice to "see" you too! I was just talkin about you to Rich (HopelessRomanticGuy). I just moved a poem into Open Poetry #35, go check that one out if you want. It's entitled "Assimilation" I'll talk to you later. Drop me an e-mail would ya? Peace! ~Kirah "Stand still awhile and dream of the times when your heart felt full." ~Reina Nash~ R.I.P. 9*6*04 You'll always be remembered, I love you! |
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