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brokenheart15 New Member
since 2005-12-16
Posts 5indiana |
Behind my back you call me a slut and you call me a whore when I confront you about it you turn and walk out the door if you dont want to be here then why do you stay? When you know you cant stand to be with me one more day You beat me, abuse me and leave me to cry as i pray to god and keep asking why When you come back you beat me again calling me names with every smack i dump you, two days later i take you back its pathetic i know but i cant let go cuz the one who hurts me is the one i love and know. feed back please!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Ello there, This is a nice poem keep em coming...is this true? If so im so sorry  x0x0 Free_Spirit07 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Notice that you asked for 'feedback' ... so will respond with complete honesty here~ "its pathetic i know" IF this post is representative of something happening in your actual life ... yes, I'd agree that "its pathetic" and needs to stop~ YOU have the power to STOP IT ! We stop both verbal and physical abuse by NOT allowing it to happen to us ... by having enough SELF-RESPECT to make sure it doesn't happen again~ I do not understand this line of thinking, "but i cant let go cuz the one who hurts me is the one i love and know." If it is happening to you ... get out of it~ love is not about acceptance of abuse~ I believe that there are others who might be going through the same verbal and physical abusive situations that would read this "acceptance" of the abuse as advocating a reason to continue in their own abusive situations~ Welcome to PiP~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Wow, so much pain... I'm so very sorry that you've gone through this. No one should ever have to be put through abuse... verbal or physical. Just remember you are strong, and can over come anything. If you make up your mind to do so. Steph |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
This is real good- but like Marge said dont let it happen to you. Hope that abusive creep stops abusing you- XoXo, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Its very good. like the others said dont let it hapenn again. you have the power to stop it! if you dont think you can ask someone else to help you. if they have a heart they will. nice write Jessica |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
This is a great write.. I agree with the others on this post.. You do have the power to stop it.. You can find someone better. My sisters.. both of them put of with this.. One has been with the same guy for 10 years. she's 28 and she could have so much more than the yelling and screaming and fights and hitting.. Not as bad as my other sister though.. she's been with this guy for 3 years and it's even worse.. so as much as I tell them.. I'm gonna tell you.. doesn't matter if you have kids together or if you've been together a month or 20 years.. Don't let your pride overrule you.. Stand up for yourself and get out of these situations. Life is not meant to be lived being abused.. So I'm being honest with you and point blank blunt.. I loved your poem it had a lot of meaning in it.. keep it up and remember.. You can do whatever it is you want to do and you can live whatever life you want to live just choose wisely..  ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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