Teen Poetry #7 |
The Darkness |
AllyKat Member
since 2005-01-30
Posts 73jeffersonville,in |
The Darkness in my heart is Pleading for your name. The Darkness in my soul is Pleading for your love. The Darkness in my heart is Pleading for you. The Darkness in my sould is just Pleading for your very touch, The only loveing touch of your hands. Its just pleading for you. ~~~~~AllyKat |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
I thought this was very sweet. I just wanted to point out a few things really quick. =) This one if probably a typo but sould should be "soul". Loveing should be "loving" and the its in the last line should be "It's." Sorry, I'm such a grammar freak. |
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