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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10
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Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2005-01-24 11:49 PM



A Dream is not Enough


Is it wrong for me to love you
Knowing so little about your life?
Maybe I'm just being foolish
For putting my heart through all this strife.


What I feel could not be mistaken
For lust or infatuation;
What I feel for you seems real,
And it brightens up every dull situation.


What if nothing ever comes of us?
And I never get to tell you how I feel?
What if I keep it all inside?
And I never get to know if my feelings are real?


All I know is every time I think of you
I want to open up my heart,
For some reason I'm afraid
That nothing will ever start.


If I let you know how I feel
I don't want to look stupid
And see the look on your face
Asking me why I did what I did.


How I want so much to hold you
And feel your arms around me
Telling me you feel the same
And together we could truly be.


I look into your sparkling eyes
And smile back at you
As we are about to kiss, the dream ends
I realize it's not true.


You could never feel that way for me
You could never look at me that way.
So before I go to bed at night
I kneel down and pray.


For a chance to get to know you
As a friend and hopefully more
As I grow to love you day by day
These dreams don't suffice like before.


I need more than dreams
I need you.
And I need to feel happy
I need this love to be true…

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Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05
Posts 154
work
1 posted 2005-01-25 12:23 PM


WOW!!! This was amazing... I loved it...   

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
2 posted 2005-01-25 06:11 PM


You write well.
Dreams do come true
And you have to learn to wait sometimes
I have a hard time waiting.

"love me, fear, do as I say, and I will be your slave." Jareth in the labryinth (David Bowie)

tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
3 posted 2005-01-25 09:27 PM


aww she's a lucky girl!! awesome write *hugs*

AIM-blueyed angel940
One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life.

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2005-01-27 11:37 PM


this was amazing actually i posted  earlier but for some reason it didnt work lol... good write chris!
mwah!
laura

-hold on to the one you love

moonguardian2004
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 64
MA, USA
5 posted 2005-03-07 09:40 AM


great job!

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

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