Teen Poetry #7 |
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The Sky Is Too Long - song |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN ![]() |
I just added this song to my purvolume account. www.purevolume.com/aprilsfalling here are the lyrics. The Sky Is Too Long The silky night sky has a double-mind tonight. It's upper torso lies exposed Shining bright freckles upon my nose. One eye looms like hopeful doom, pointing out the unbridled groom. Blow me over, Please blow over. There's nothing left but to... Blow me over. The flat black sky has a double-mind tonight. Lower legs cower behind the anger of October nights. Ruffles line the midnight dress hiding jewels among the mess. Blow me over, Please blow over. There's nothing left but to... Blow me over. Your eyes full of kindness, I don't know if I can accept this gift. My two natures keep fighting, Pulling me into this rift. Blow me over, Please blow over. There's nothing left but to... Blow me over. |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I listened to it....AWESOME! ![]() ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks for listening to it. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
The guitar is really good and the words are obviously excellent, but the melody...seems to leave something to be desired who am I to say, though. is it you who sings or someone else? |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i sing, and i agree that the melody is a bit boring. I usually have another guy sing and he comes up with more creative stuff. your judgement is great. thanks for listening. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
melody perhaps is the most difficult part of song writing. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i would agree. i am pretty new to writing melody. i have played guitar for 6 years so thats nothing new to me. like i said, my other singer usually writed the melody and i sing improv. harmony. it works best that way. |
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