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Tough love |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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The problem with swearing “You will never Hear me say ‘I love you’” is how much that Idiom, nasty temptation, finds clever Ways to insert itself “I like you” or “Putain je t’aime” not to mention combat: My white palms are cold, might as well put your Forehead to it, nothing personal mate. Abrupt passions for L word: lever, late, Largess, lat and lore, still, he’ll never guess, Aren’t I tough for avoiding that excess? |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Lol. I'll be the first to admit I don't get this. Not sure yet if it's just that deep, or i'm just that stupid. Leaning towards the former. Still, I agree with what I understood of the beginning. It seems a very good work.. just wish I understood it's meaning... oh... excess.... hmm.... *ponders* -Rich Winamp Is Playing: "Raw" Staind Dysfunction "I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless" |
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Baby D Junior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 14 |
i think i get this, and i think i like it, my fav part, "arent i tough for avoiding that excess" i think what this poem means (tell me if im right) is he'll never guess that he loves you because you havent said the "L" word yet, and your avoiding the "excess" of the "L" word.... ??? i dunno hahahhaha |
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Baby D Junior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 14 |
sorry i meant to say he'll never guess that you love him.... |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
yes Baby D, that's the sum of it, except that my actions and alternatives amount to say " i love you". so the poem is showing how pointless it is to avoid something that just spalshes out through other windows  |
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