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The rememberance of her
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The rememberance of her |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
When I was little, You were there with me and my sister, Bringing all our sorrows to an end. When you were here, Our family was held together by your joy. Time passed by, We moved away from you. Less time we spent together, The more I realized how I really missed you. The holidays came near, And I just couldn’t wait to see you. A month before Christmas, You let go… I thought constantly, That I was the one who should have left. I miss you so much, Nothing is really the same without you… All that we went through, You were there to comfort us. Now I have no one, But the memories of you. Its wasn’t your time to go, But your outgoing passion for everything still lives on. Your going to be with me until my dying day, Because I still carry you with me… |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Delaney, this poem really touched my heart. Even though it's very sad, it is so loving. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
this definately is a well written piece of work. It reminded me of a precious person in my life aswell, so it really did touch me. Thanks for sharing. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
boom!!! (said in a john madden voice) good write |
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