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Teen Poetry #7

work hard... get nothing?

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-01-07 04:37 PM

Work for weeks... and not make the team,
you wasted your time right?
you ended up with nothing.

But honestly,
you only end up with what you let your self to.

You now know what to fix for the next time.
People that you may have never guessed believe in you.
You touched people's lives.

You left with more than what you would have received by making that team.

Open your eyes.
See what is there.

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
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1 posted 2005-01-07 06:37 PM

I loved this poem. I went to highlight my favorite part but I liked the whole thing. This was awesome!!!

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2005-01-07 07:10 PM

thanks! i wrote and experienced this today actually...

moonguardian2004
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

3 posted 2005-01-08 09:27 PM

great job! very inspiring!

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

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