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Until Next Time
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Until Next Time |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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Until next time, When i see you again, and feel my heart beat, and to you, my heart i lend. Until next time, will your voice ring in my ears, reminding me of your comfort, that takes away my fears. Until next time, will your touch forever remain, a tingle in my spine, like the first time it came. Until next time, will your kiss linger on my lips, sening electricity through me, all the way to my fingertips. Until next time, my heart will ache for you, waiting for something, a love that is so true. Please tell me what you think! To the world, you're one person; |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnneeeeeeeeee |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Erin, I enjoyed your poem very much. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
You're poem was great! Everything was building up...and the end made this poem. At least in my eyes. Good job! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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