Teen Poetry #7 |
Waiting |
KeEbLeR_eLf06 New Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 5 |
I would wait an eternity for you my love, Whenever you are away you take my heart with you, I am always left behind, never able to go with you when you leave. Always left to wait as each passing second becomes lost in the sea of time, Each moment that passes I feel another part of my heart break away, Yet I am still here waiting, my whole being crumpling just so I can see you once more. Please come back soon my love, for I am still here waiting for you, To have you in my arms again and for you to give me back my heart, which you took so long ago. |
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C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
OH my gosh Becky!!!! that was sooo beautifull... tell me... have you been through that to compell you to write this? just wonderin gurly. Love ya babez! THAT WAS SOOO WONDERFULL ^_^ *hug* -vik |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ha ha dude....i am the one |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautifullly written romantic poem. My favorite poems are romantic ones. That's about all I write. I really enjoyed this one. Hugs Ethel |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
First off, welcome to pip!! I really enjoyed this poem, I can relate to it. Thanks for sharing. W.W. |
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-=Kiff=- Junior Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 16North wales UK |
That’s beuitfiful man. He who seeks peace must first prepare for war. |
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