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Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2004-12-29 10:15 PM

What is wrong with me?
Why don’t I belong?
I feel so lost
So empty inside
I thought everything was getting better
The scars were beginning to heal
But instead of taking a step forward
I took two steps back
It’s to hard
I don’t want to fight it anymore
I can’t fight it anymore
It hurts so bad
I can’t take it anymore
The pain is unbearable
Make it go away!
Make it all go away…..

I don't know much at all, I don't know wrong from right, All I know is that I love you tonight
-Good Charlotte

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2004-12-29 11:14 PM

its good. i totally feel you on this one

I can't be your superman

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2004-12-29 11:22 PM

Hey Linds! I feel the emotion of this poem and I feel for you. I know that it is hard to fit in and high school is a very difficult passage from childhood to adulthood. I've learned a lot about myself and others since high school.

Even though you feel all alone right now, you aren't there is someone out there who feels just like you do. I know it can be painful at times but it can get better.

Try joining some clubs to get to know other people, and maybe that will help, until then I'd like to be your friend.

-Kel

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2004-12-30 02:12 AM

You know, when I get like this, my friend Genelle usually says, "Ohh, shut up." Of course, that's something I'd never say. (^.^) We all feel like that, and most who can write about it. Though not so many as well as you! I feel this poem to the core. Just keep going, and sooner or later the darkness and pain will recede. You just have to keep moving forward. You'll be okay, the pain does begin to ebb.

"and I searched your eyes for an answer
and shuddered at what I found there;
as my skin shrunk away from conclusion
that you lacked the strength to

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-30 07:39 PM

This is so emotional. Just like Rich said, just hang in there and eventually the pain and hurting and everything will go away.

~Alli~

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