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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent 
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i am not jealous of him having another girlfriend eventhough she is my best friend i dont like him although i am jealous... i can not stand seeing you together the love, the passion, the sole thing that is missing in my life ok i wrote this in about five minutes it was just on my mind and i had to write please comment i will revise in a later time |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
haha I know. me too. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can realte to this. Can't wait to read the revised poem!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
I really liked this.... It was great. Jezzika you know he really wants me |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA |
your honesty is great. lets go play hide and go seek. you gotta put your hands over your eyes. because you're it! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Yeah, I know this feeling well. Spent my entire 8th and most of my 9th grade feeling this way. I'm sort of there again now. Trying with all my might to avoid it. So hang in there. Sooner or later, we'll all have that love and passion in our lives again. Just be careful not to miss it when it comes your way. Well anyway, I digress. This poem was very good, if a bit ranting. Different from most of the norm. Glad to see that! -Rich Winamp Is Playing: "Unwell" Matchbox 20 More Than You Think You Are "I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless" |
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