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Teen Poetry #7

print out your life on a piece of white paper.

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2004-12-19 06:27 PM

inside my eyes,
a pearly conscience of lies.

you said that once our connection
glues together our hearts,
there will be no fall.

but couldn't you see, the real
me inside the perfection.
like bubble wrap, the popping
sound will echo in your ears
forever.

don't turn around, don't face
your crowd. all you'll feel are these
misconceptions, all you'll begin
to see is your reflection in pieces.

lies are what hurt us,
love is what fades.

remember to breathe after you exhale.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-12-19 11:49 PM

Very good piece. Thought provoking, powerful. I especially love the last 2 stanzas. Good imagery here as well.
Thanks for sharing.

But Im comforted
by the fact that I can hurt inside
all I want to
without anyone ever knowing
~WinterWren~

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-12-29 07:42 PM

all you'll begin
to see is your reflection in pieces.

I feel like this was on the brink of sounding cliche except for the few parts that made it different.

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