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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-19 10:36 AM



to all the days
i've wondered

what to do
all by myself,

how to better spend
my wasted time,

than finding
someone else,

why this angel
spread her wings

to shade me
from the sun,

i'll have to make this toast,
and drink until its done.

i've seen both sides
of yeng-yang.

i've found
the bad
in good.

but now i have
the good
in bad,

and die for it
i would.

you're my light
inside
the darkness,

my angel
when life
is hell,

the white
against my
blackest fears,

and white
you wear
so well,

my silver moon
in the starless night,

you stand out
against it all,

the wings upon
my flightless soul

to carry me
should i fall.

yes i've seen both sides of yeng-yang,
and known such bad in good,

but ive found you,

so good
amidst bad

and die for you i would


~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2004-12-19 11:09 AM


seriously you do the mushy stuff really well I like this one lots!
~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams
2 posted 2004-12-19 01:37 PM


hahaha. i do have an affinity for romantic poetry. thank you SEA.
tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
3 posted 2004-12-19 11:37 PM


Dang!! I really really liked this! You used yeng-yang so well, amazing job! Hope you don't mind if I keep this? Cause i"m going to anyways hehe

AIM-blueyed angel940
One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life.

*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2005-01-01 02:08 AM


Wow...you do the romantic stuff SO well! lol.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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