Teen Poetry #7 |
Yeng-Yang |
~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
to all the days i've wondered what to do all by myself, how to better spend my wasted time, than finding someone else, why this angel spread her wings to shade me from the sun, i'll have to make this toast, and drink until its done. i've seen both sides of yeng-yang. i've found the bad in good. but now i have the good in bad, and die for it i would. you're my light inside the darkness, my angel when life is hell, the white against my blackest fears, and white you wear so well, my silver moon in the starless night, you stand out against it all, the wings upon my flightless soul to carry me should i fall. yes i've seen both sides of yeng-yang, and known such bad in good, but ive found you, so good amidst bad and die for you i would ~ the stuff dreams are made of ~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
seriously you do the mushy stuff really well I like this one lots! |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
hahaha. i do have an affinity for romantic poetry. thank you SEA. |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Dang!! I really really liked this! You used yeng-yang so well, amazing job! Hope you don't mind if I keep this? Cause i"m going to anyways hehe AIM-blueyed angel940 One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow...you do the romantic stuff SO well! lol. ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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