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The Silence |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
THE SILENCE a moon is slience, but whisper a sun is lighten, but warmth my heart is sad, but hope a shades are drawn to fill up me her face keeps silence give me a title titled me a warmer her silence's face keeps quiet a words come on the tongue are fear to be spelled her silence face gives me a mean the eyes are brightten but are tearing send me a silence message where the music are playing just give me a sense, that i forget give me a life, which i like don't leave for a while, as i need you beside the time is hard enough, the night is tearing the tears are dropping of the moon light complain why this life is came up just tears, pains, but she keeps her smile on how that does it come, but it comes i miss the silence eyes, lips and hands |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this...it's not my favorite by you, but I definatley don't know why it hasn't gotten any replies yet. Just a suggestion - I would just go back and fix some of the spelling errors. But other than that, nice write. Thanks for sharing!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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